like a rubber ball
on stony pavement
her kiss
a mid-summer shiver
her dew drop eyes
keep me warm through winter
and oh dear maiden
what a tangled thread
you leave me in
I’m rollin over
your lush bed
intoxicates
this lowly servant
and in enchantment
I’m cursed to wander
through falling leaves
and snowy winds
till spring rains
bring back to me
your flowering face
14 comments:
yay!!! m d first to comment :D
d flowering face will come back bro...u'll b intoxicated again...servant i dont kno but u'll b a master of love again...d thread will be untangled n u'll live n breathe again...not in falling leaves but on dat lush bed of flowers
nice one babs, i understand pretty much everything :P
tc Cuty
words that feel like a barb in heart, lines brimming with pain, that you so gracefully express in verses. "she" will listen. "if winter is here can spring be far behind."
AHHHH! I am loving this seriously!
this is going to make all girl blush! You can tell this was conjured from the heart!!!
ps. I love John Mayer! have you heard Your Body is a wonderland, if not listen to it!
See ya around!!
Oh my, you put me in a spill through those wonderful verses!
Wow! whatta poet!
what a tangled thread
you leave me in
Given that guys are so completely lost at times when it comes to feelings I actually think some woman enjoy leaving us so tangled up.
Intoxication comes back to you in sometime..keep the faitH! :)..
and ooh yess..this was makorly romantic and wonderful! :))
@ mayz
hehe ;)
the spring is taking too long :(
master of love..i don't know..have no experience ;D
bed of flowers..wow..this takes me to places..
thanks a ton bro
tc
@ Cess
ohh i knew you would..
take care frenchess
@ Abhishek
oh boy,
i so wish she would someday visit and read,(the selfish in me thinks so)
"listens" :)
she doesn't ..
my spring will come in time .
but till then i will indulge in fun(whatever i can get).
tc
@ NE
:D
thank you NE
10x a ton
i know someone who blushed ;D
p.s.
ohh it's a fav
have u heard "come undone" by duran duran
tc
@ MysLykesMeeh
hugs and kisses lolz
thank you dear
take care
@ Beach Bum
maybe she njoys it too...
then maybe she doesn't
i will never know
@ Crystal
faith..forever and ever :)
i have eternity of faith in me.but ppl don't :(
thank you dear
thanks again
tc
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