who met all the drops,
and remembered their names
lived in the monsoon
clusters of gems and crystals
snatched from above,
floated in his drink
a place where it rained
the dream he had
all drowned straight to the bottom.
Now as he sleeps
there's rain on his lips
he tosses and turns'
crystals poke at every inch
gems blind his closed eyes
old scars are,still felt every night
30 comments:
its all gona b fine..
hamesha ke tarah yeh bhi bohot aachi likhi hai..
it even rhymes..
mere poem kabhi nai karte
beautiful expression... gives really sad feeling though. You are true to yourself, rainboy, arent you? :)
wow you're back!! what a post to come back with!!
Good to see you writing again Bro!
Nice verse :)
lovely! And u r a piscean? Super. when is ur bday?
Hmn..I wanna meet that guy who invented rains...I want to tell him to stop raining on you, instead rain on me too coz' I'm so damn tired about this freakin' snow! --lolzz! (Just kidding)
Seriously..that was way 'too nice'...yet, there's still evidence of the wound from the past! ....
See:
In every last lines such as: lived in the monsoon; all drowned straight to the bottom; and esp. old scars are, still felt every night ...concluded the feelings of the poet--!
The real beauty of gems can be seen through... with an open eye!
TY for stopping by my blog!
WOW I love this verse...I got all teary reading this. Did u write it?
btw d u play the guitar? I love guitars.
Keshi.
I am seriously dumb, just found your new site. Glad to have you back. I will add this one to my bloglist tomorrow.
muuahhh ... *hugs*
beautiful words, as always. you outdo yourself each time. but your thoughts are still a chaos, are they not?
the second innings are laden with even better words..
lesser..but express so much more..
it never stops raining on u...does it?
TC
d pain is still thr bro...come man...i kno its tough...but i dont think u r tryin...cant c u like this bro...come on smile :)
@ joiedevivre
thank you ji
ki haal chaal
@ lena
always have been dear
take care n hugs
@ phoenix
thank you ..yeah ji me is back as long as i have time.
take care n hugs
@ sameera
thank you sis
take care n hugs
@ how do we know
thanks ji.
nahi ji i am an Arian.Born on 3rd of april!
@ MysLykesMeeh
come here than..you have been invited :)
Snow..have been under snowfall once in my life.Must be so much fun.
sometimes the real beauty can't been seen with eyes.
take care n hugs
Wow, very nice bhai.. ye padh ke toh koi bhi pat jayegi.. ;)
P.S. Naya Saal, Naya Blog.. Mubarakaan
@ Keshi
no need to thank miss.
It's a pleasure to read you.
well,this verse was just another reminder of rains.
'rainboy' does come back now and then.
did learn guitar for 4 days..after that i never had the time.Maybe in feb i start again.
take care n hugs
@ Beach Bum
hey buddy,
how have you been.
nice to see you here.
blogroll..thanks mate
@ raingirl
thank you sis
itni tareef mat kiya ker
i am not worth it....
i don't even know for how long i will keep writing.I think in training i will not get time to post. :(
anyways sis
take care n hugs
@ shoe girl
thank you thaNk you :)
i live in rainville remember??
tc miss
@ mayz
bro bas aise hi college se aate waqt bas mein likh diya tha.
99% ok hoon... :D
hugs
@ Oxy
hehe ..kya baat hai big B ..lolz
aapke muh mein ghee shakkar, pastry,chocolates,muffins and a lots of vodka..
P.s.
goa chalo kisi time
Oye Bhai, I hate chocolates, n muffins, n ghee n shakkar.. but Vodka add karke tune apne aapko bacha liya.. else.. Vodka to u too.. CHEERS!!!
P.S.Chalo chalte hain.. pracs khatam karo pehle janaab.. vaise March end se pehle mera kahin ka scene nahi ban sakta.. uske baad lets jam up in Goa.
@ oxy
i hate all that but chocolates..i can't do without them.
Vodka as u know a fav..
bas last one on 18th phir to azaadi hai.
Sure bro me too will be busy till june now..after that we make a plan.
tc big B
hi! i have added this my friend :D
Life's sweets and spices
It gets so much better! I had to learn about the pain also!
Nice one here!!
HUGS!
@ LIZA
thank you dear..thanks a ton.
@ NE
thanks miss..
it will i hope so too... :)
A smile with tears running down my cheeks, I read it... Glad that it rained and glad that you wrote..
@ the seeker
it will keep raining :)
thanks bro thanks a ton
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