me and you
we were a bright burning spark
ephemeral
in that vast everlasting chill
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20 comments:
niceeeeee!!!!!
@ mayz
thanku bro..
here for the first time - and i am loving it.
Awesome line!
great line, bro...n i love this pic ;)
nice lines.so haiku is back!!(i hadn't it 4 quite sumtym now.)
love how this poem beautifully references the cold chill being swept into the world this season... how cold does it get in your city by the way?
cheers!
It's so deep! but due to it's deepness I couldn't quiet get the last line...
"in that vast everlasting chill"- you mean in the rain?
sometimes, love, which we thought forever is just fleeting and just passing through like the wind!
:)
ab mein bhi likhungi haiku..
(inspired by vikram)
@ Abhishek SiM
welcome here & thanks man
@ rain girl
thank you yaar
** bearhugs
@ Anwesa
well just had a bit in mind..so out came haiku :D
@ spoolartist
it goes down to -3 -4 ..
Rum takes care of it..hehe
@ MysLykeMeeh
yep..lady yep
you said is so right..
hugs and tc
@ joiedevivre
are sure yaar..jaldi likh daal
me will loove to read you..
You did a great job at this Haiku!
You got some talent!!!!
Ne
That's beautiful but it's not Haiku bro!
Oh, good man, you shall insist on this haiku versification because... you're good. Good.
@ Ne
me and talented..lol
thanks thanks
@ sameera
not haiku??
then what is haiku..tell me i will write ...
@ runnerfrog
thanks bro
thanks a ton
will try more...
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