@ mayzthanku bro..
here for the first time - and i am loving it.Awesome line!
great line, bro...n i love this pic ;)
nice lines.so haiku is back!!(i hadn't it 4 quite sumtym now.)
love how this poem beautifully references the cold chill being swept into the world this season... how cold does it get in your city by the way?cheers!
It's so deep! but due to it's deepness I couldn't quiet get the last line..."in that vast everlasting chill"- you mean in the rain? sometimes, love, which we thought forever is just fleeting and just passing through like the wind!
:)ab mein bhi likhungi haiku..(inspired by vikram)
@ Abhishek SiMwelcome here & thanks man
@ rain girlthank you yaar** bearhugs
@ Anwesawell just had a bit in mind..so out came haiku :D
@ spoolartistit goes down to -3 -4 ..Rum takes care of it..hehe
@ MysLykeMeehyep..lady yepyou said is so right..hugs and tc
@ joiedevivreare sure yaar..jaldi likh daalme will loove to read you..
You did a great job at this Haiku!You got some talent!!!! Ne
That's beautiful but it's not Haiku bro!
Oh, good man, you shall insist on this haiku versification because... you're good. Good.
@ Neme and talented..lolthanks thanks
@ sameeranot haiku??then what is haiku..tell me i will write ...
@ runnerfrogthanks bro thanks a tonwill try more...
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