Friday, January 16, 2009

Haiku

so love
me and you
we were a bright burning spark
ephemeral
in that vast everlasting chill

20 comments:

mayz said...

niceeeeee!!!!!

oo7 said...

@ mayz

thanku bro..

ABHISHEK SiM said...

here for the first time - and i am loving it.

Awesome line!

rain girl said...

great line, bro...n i love this pic ;)

ANWESA said...

nice lines.so haiku is back!!(i hadn't it 4 quite sumtym now.)

the spool artist said...

love how this poem beautifully references the cold chill being swept into the world this season... how cold does it get in your city by the way?

cheers!

MysLykeMeeh said...

It's so deep! but due to it's deepness I couldn't quiet get the last line...

"in that vast everlasting chill"- you mean in the rain?

sometimes, love, which we thought forever is just fleeting and just passing through like the wind!

joiedevivre said...

:)
ab mein bhi likhungi haiku..
(inspired by vikram)

oo7 said...

@ Abhishek SiM

welcome here & thanks man

oo7 said...

@ rain girl

thank you yaar
** bearhugs

oo7 said...

@ Anwesa

well just had a bit in mind..so out came haiku :D

oo7 said...

@ spoolartist

it goes down to -3 -4 ..
Rum takes care of it..hehe

oo7 said...

@ MysLykeMeeh

yep..lady yep

you said is so right..

hugs and tc

oo7 said...

@ joiedevivre


are sure yaar..jaldi likh daal

me will loove to read you..

NE~ISM said...

You did a great job at this Haiku!
You got some talent!!!!

Ne

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

That's beautiful but it's not Haiku bro!

runnerfrog said...

Oh, good man, you shall insist on this haiku versification because... you're good. Good.

oo7 said...

@ Ne

me and talented..lol

thanks thanks

oo7 said...

@ sameera

not haiku??
then what is haiku..tell me i will write ...

oo7 said...

@ runnerfrog

thanks bro
thanks a ton
will try more...

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