Saturday, January 31, 2009

the cloud

the cloud remains

slowly slowly,
they leave
in search of their destination
as they depart
a feeling sinks in
something not right
something gone wrong
what was the mistake?
who was not strong?

beauty of memories
so pure
always coming back
taking me to that time
making me smile
as each one keeps
some portion of my heart


If i was Paris she would've been my Helen...

16 comments:

Phoenix said...

beauty of memories
so pure
always coming back
taking me to that time
making me smile
as each one keeps
some portion of his heart<<

amazing lines.. i could so identify with them... :)

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Hope these clouds clear soon...

mayz said...

u r paris...but she wasnt ur helen!!!

Roo-Ba-Roo said...

"beauty of memories
so pure
always coming back"- Nice -

hope u meet her soon

rain girl said...

awww so beautiful... :)

NE~ISM said...

Memories can be the most beautiful things.. But at the same time painful! Your Helen is right around the corner, just wait, who needs Paris, when we have you?

Very Nice V!

Ne

Dr Roshan R said...

came across this blog while bloghopping.. just wanted to say very well made blog

Beach Bum said...

Been seeing a few clouds myself lately. Hope they blow away soon for the both of us.

oo7 said...

@ phoenix

thank you yaar

take care n hugs

oo7 said...

@ Sameera

amen !

oo7 said...

@ mayz

it's so hard to swallow the truth.

thanks buddy :D

oo7 said...

@ Roo-Ba-Roo

welcome here ji

maybe we both don't want to see each other now.

as mayz said maybe she wasn't my helen.

take care

oo7 said...

@ rain girl

bearhugs yaar

i miss you

take care

oo7 said...

@ NE

yeah memories ..
wish they were always sweet..

i am scared to go around the corner,
wish she comes around..;)

take care miss

oo7 said...

@ Dr roshan R

welcome here
and keep coming back ;D

take care doc saab

oo7 said...

@ Beach Bum

Both of us need fast winds to blow them away

tc buddy
Hugs

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