Thursday, January 22, 2009

A fantasy

she threw me sideways
like a rubber ball
on stony pavement
her kiss
a mid-summer shiver

her dew drop eyes
keep me warm through winter
and oh dear maiden
what a tangled thread
you leave me in

I’m rollin over
your lush bed
this lowly servant
and in enchantment
I’m cursed to wander
through falling leaves

and snowy winds
till spring rains
bring back to me
your flowering face


mayz said...

yay!!! m d first to comment :D

d flowering face will come back bro...u'll b intoxicated again...servant i dont kno but u'll b a master of love again...d thread will be untangled n u'll live n breathe again...not in falling leaves but on dat lush bed of flowers

Cess said...

nice one babs, i understand pretty much everything :P
tc Cuty

ABHISHEK SiM said...

words that feel like a barb in heart, lines brimming with pain, that you so gracefully express in verses. "she" will listen. "if winter is here can spring be far behind."

Anonymous said...

AHHHH! I am loving this seriously!
this is going to make all girl blush! You can tell this was conjured from the heart!!!

ps. I love John Mayer! have you heard Your Body is a wonderland, if not listen to it!

See ya around!!

MysLykeMeeh said...

Oh my, you put me in a spill through those wonderful verses!

Wow! whatta poet!

Beach Bum said...

what a tangled thread
you leave me in

Given that guys are so completely lost at times when it comes to feelings I actually think some woman enjoy leaving us so tangled up.

Cяystal said...

Intoxication comes back to you in sometime..keep the faitH! :)..
and ooh yess..this was makorly romantic and wonderful! :))

oo7 said...

@ mayz

hehe ;)

the spring is taking too long :(

master of love..i don't know..have no experience ;D

bed of takes me to places..

thanks a ton bro


oo7 said...

@ Cess

ohh i knew you would..

take care frenchess

oo7 said...

@ Abhishek

oh boy,
i so wish she would someday visit and read,(the selfish in me thinks so)

"listens" :)
she doesn't ..

my spring will come in time .
but till then i will indulge in fun(whatever i can get).


oo7 said...

@ NE

thank you NE
10x a ton

i know someone who blushed ;D

ohh it's a fav
have u heard "come undone" by duran duran


oo7 said...

@ MysLykesMeeh

hugs and kisses lolz

thank you dear

take care

oo7 said...

@ Beach Bum

maybe she njoys it too...
then maybe she doesn't
i will never know

oo7 said...

@ Crystal

faith..forever and ever :)
i have eternity of faith in me.but ppl don't :(

thank you dear
thanks again


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