About your father and mother
And how you might look when you’re sad
I want to hear you whisper to me
on the phone
as if hiding yourself
from me and you.
why dontcha go on
and tell me all about
your favorite state lines
and faith in the next few miles
16 comments:
Another one of your beautiful poems. :) How are you my friend? Hope you're having a terrific weekend. :)
Life's sweets and spices
welcome to d enchanted wonderland rabbit...hehehehe!!!
beautiful thought...
I have been here and read this a couple of times.. I still have the same assumption... You have been well consumed by a enchanted forest. Hope it is not a maze! and your find your way through!
awww... everybody sometimes needs someone who will just... listen.. reading this I really appreciate the 'listener' in my life...
very wistful
I really enjoyed that middle stanza, the allusion hiding is something special. This is a great piece of work.
:)
again loveoplane fyling high n high
@ Liza
hey ,, thanks mam
i am good.
weekend just vanish...
too busy for myself.
@ mayz
i am lost here...
need a guide ;D
@ Mys Lyke Meeh
thnx a ton
@ Ne
you know it all,better then anyone.
i need a guide here...
help me...
@ B n B
yeah, u are right...
we all need that someone special...
tc and cheers
@ Beach bum
thanx mate...
your comments make me feel so good...
thank you bro
@ joie
yeah soaring to the sky...
lol thanx bullu aunty.
tc
ahh! what a poem. dil khush ho jata hai once u read such quality poems.
@ preeti
thank you ji
:D
hugs again
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