Friday, June 12, 2009

next few miles....

I wonder about your laughter and your stars
About your father and mother
And how you might look when you’re sad

I want to hear you whisper to me
on the phone
as if hiding yourself
from me and you.

why dontcha go on
and tell me all about
your favorite state lines
and faith in the next few miles

16 comments:

Liza said...

Another one of your beautiful poems. :) How are you my friend? Hope you're having a terrific weekend. :)

Life's sweets and spices

Mayz said...

welcome to d enchanted wonderland rabbit...hehehehe!!!

Mys Lyke Meeh said...

beautiful thought...

NE~ISM said...

I have been here and read this a couple of times.. I still have the same assumption... You have been well consumed by a enchanted forest. Hope it is not a maze! and your find your way through!

Beauty and the BEast said...

awww... everybody sometimes needs someone who will just... listen.. reading this I really appreciate the 'listener' in my life...

very wistful

Beach Bum said...

I really enjoyed that middle stanza, the allusion hiding is something special. This is a great piece of work.

joiedevivre said...

:)
again loveoplane fyling high n high

rabbit said...

@ Liza

hey ,, thanks mam
i am good.
weekend just vanish...
too busy for myself.

rabbit said...

@ mayz

i am lost here...

need a guide ;D

rabbit said...

@ Mys Lyke Meeh

thnx a ton

rabbit said...

@ Ne

you know it all,better then anyone.

i need a guide here...

help me...

rabbit said...

@ B n B

yeah, u are right...

we all need that someone special...


tc and cheers

rabbit said...

@ Beach bum

thanx mate...

your comments make me feel so good...

thank you bro

rabbit said...

@ joie

yeah soaring to the sky...

lol thanx bullu aunty.
tc

Preetilata【ツ】 said...

ahh! what a poem. dil khush ho jata hai once u read such quality poems.

rabbit said...

@ preeti

thank you ji
:D

hugs again

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