Sunday, June 14, 2009

his heart ...

sitting in the moonlight
i feel for his guitar,
having limited strings
some few thin strands
and I fear
I may hear another
a brisk, sharp, cracking sound

a forthcoming day
i know
he maybe able to say a few words
that will make
breaths
leap
in their
pulsing Form

so rabbit sits by himself
with her and carrots in his mind
just wondering
if only this guitar wasn't his heart...

40 comments:

divya said...

wow!! beautiful!

NE~ISM said...

I have to say, I really like this..

Your heart and the guitar! ahhhh I like it!

Ne

Phoenix said...

beautiful!! :)

joiedevivre said...

ouch it touched my heart..it was so sweet

d gypsy! said...

heart guitars, her, thoughts :)

and maybe it was a full moon night when it drizzled...

beautiful, it is!

Mayz said...

bro my first read n i thot this was sooooo double meanin...

i feel for his guitar...lol

with her and carrots in his mind...omg!!! rofl!!!

Vee said...

Yea, If Only... ;)

Liza said...

Beautiful and touching! :)

Life's sweets and spices

The EnCHANtress said...

Hey Vicky, I think I need this translated to me. I really did not understand this at all. :(

I am sorry. I did get from this that you are in love, am I right?

Beauty and the BEast said...

thoughts.. sometimes I wonder if thoughts are all that make and break stuff..

Pallav said...

Wow
Superb....
what a peice...
beautiful
thanks for visiting my blog..
Pallav

Ria said...

that was too good!! :P Nice style of writing dude.

Pallav said...

hey
i m following it..
u knw i again read it
its mind blowing
kuch hume bhi sikha do
:P

Pallav

rabbit said...

@ divya

thank you visiting

tc

rabbit said...

@ Ne

hehe thank you
these days everything seems romantic to me...

rabbit said...

@ PHOENIX

THANX RAKA

rabbit said...

@ joie

really...sing it to your hero...
he will like it for sure..

tc bullu aunty

rabbit said...

@ d gypsy!

ohh u know it all...
it was full moon...

thank you miss

rabbit said...

@ mayz

*with her and carrots in his mind...omg!!! rofl!!!

bhai, bhai...
lele maze...tera time hai ...lol

rabbit said...

@ Vee

u got me Big B

hugs

rabbit said...

@ Liza

thanx mam

rabbit said...

@ The EnCHANtress

what?? it's so easy...


yes,you are right!
I am drenched to core this time.

rabbit said...

@ Beauty and the BEast

YEAH, I am still learning...

hugs n tc sis

rabbit said...

@ Pallav

Wow, thanx a lot for vising me mate

tc and have a nice day

rabbit said...

@ Ria

welcome and thank you ji

i dunno even understand what i write...lol


tc

rabbit said...

@ Pallav

omg, lol

dude, i just scribble whatever i feel
that's what i can advise you to do...

Beach Bum said...

This was another big beautiful hit! The analogy between the heart and a guitar with broken strings really got to me.

Shanu said...

Wow..beautiful and touching!

rabbit said...

@ Beach Bum

thanx mate...
have been bust lately..will frop by soon.

rabbit said...

@ shanu

welcome here miss...
thaNks for likinG it...
will drop by soon
take care...

Preetilata【ツ】 said...

very nice. loved reading it

rabbit said...

@ Preetilata【ツ】

thank you thank you...

:)

Liza said...

As always... this one is beautiful!

No, I did not paint it. Found it in a restaurant. :D


Life's sweets and spices

rabbit said...

@ liza

thank you

it looked beautiful...
:)

Liza said...

Happy Thursday!!!

Life's sweets and spices

divsi said...

lovely poem:) n a lovelier template:)

SHWETHA said...

voila! very nice. keep up. good music too.

rabbit said...

@ liza

thank you

rabbit said...

@ divsi

welcome here ji
i love the template too...
thank you ...
tc

rabbit said...

@ shwetha

welcome welcome...

thank you girl

tc n hugs

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