sitting in the moonlight
i feel for his guitar,
having limited strings
some few thin strands
and I fear
I may hear another
a brisk, sharp, cracking sound
a forthcoming day
i know
he maybe able to say a few words
that will make
breaths
leap
in their
pulsing Form
so rabbit sits by himself
with her and carrots in his mind
just wondering
if only this guitar wasn't his heart...
the girl
5 years ago
40 comments:
wow!! beautiful!
I have to say, I really like this..
Your heart and the guitar! ahhhh I like it!
Ne
beautiful!! :)
ouch it touched my heart..it was so sweet
heart guitars, her, thoughts :)
and maybe it was a full moon night when it drizzled...
beautiful, it is!
bro my first read n i thot this was sooooo double meanin...
i feel for his guitar...lol
with her and carrots in his mind...omg!!! rofl!!!
Yea, If Only... ;)
Beautiful and touching! :)
Life's sweets and spices
Hey Vicky, I think I need this translated to me. I really did not understand this at all. :(
I am sorry. I did get from this that you are in love, am I right?
thoughts.. sometimes I wonder if thoughts are all that make and break stuff..
Wow
Superb....
what a peice...
beautiful
thanks for visiting my blog..
Pallav
that was too good!! :P Nice style of writing dude.
hey
i m following it..
u knw i again read it
its mind blowing
kuch hume bhi sikha do
:P
Pallav
@ divya
thank you visiting
tc
@ Ne
hehe thank you
these days everything seems romantic to me...
@ PHOENIX
THANX RAKA
@ joie
really...sing it to your hero...
he will like it for sure..
tc bullu aunty
@ d gypsy!
ohh u know it all...
it was full moon...
thank you miss
@ mayz
*with her and carrots in his mind...omg!!! rofl!!!
bhai, bhai...
lele maze...tera time hai ...lol
@ Vee
u got me Big B
hugs
@ Liza
thanx mam
@ The EnCHANtress
what?? it's so easy...
yes,you are right!
I am drenched to core this time.
@ Beauty and the BEast
YEAH, I am still learning...
hugs n tc sis
@ Pallav
Wow, thanx a lot for vising me mate
tc and have a nice day
@ Ria
welcome and thank you ji
i dunno even understand what i write...lol
tc
@ Pallav
omg, lol
dude, i just scribble whatever i feel
that's what i can advise you to do...
This was another big beautiful hit! The analogy between the heart and a guitar with broken strings really got to me.
Wow..beautiful and touching!
@ Beach Bum
thanx mate...
have been bust lately..will frop by soon.
@ shanu
welcome here miss...
thaNks for likinG it...
will drop by soon
take care...
very nice. loved reading it
@ Preetilata【ツ】
thank you thank you...
:)
As always... this one is beautiful!
No, I did not paint it. Found it in a restaurant. :D
Life's sweets and spices
@ liza
thank you
it looked beautiful...
:)
Happy Thursday!!!
Life's sweets and spices
lovely poem:) n a lovelier template:)
voila! very nice. keep up. good music too.
@ liza
thank you
@ divsi
welcome here ji
i love the template too...
thank you ...
tc
@ shwetha
welcome welcome...
thank you girl
tc n hugs
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