walking the jagged path
of the thousand lines
he wrote,
still he can't let it go
treasure was...
her eyes blinking
still drinking from the dried fountain
the empty ghost
whispers
carrying me off to dreams
forgotten
or
thrown away
his heart aches
blurred visions from a beautiful past
worn down to the bone
making him burn
a b/w timeline
visions without colors
stimulate him...
holding back and choking
like a bubble
he will burst one day
scared of sitting still
but not afraid to run
rising up from the dust
in instants
transcendent
and out of time
he knows without knowing
what it's like
being loved and becoming one
he wishes he could be one of the lucky ones...
I've cried more in the past day (no worries, it's welcome) than I have this whole past year.....
...just thought ya should know,
considering we would never meet each other.
Someone please set my soul kitten free...
P.S.
It was supposed to be more
Wherever you are
There's far too much of me still in there.
Saturday, July 18, 2009
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"whispers
carrying me off to dreams
forgotten"
I like that.
Cheers! Or should I say cheer up?
full of nostalgia and warmth...
i wish i cud write abt a few things like that...
and more than the poem, the P.S impressed me...
sigh, i hope i'd be lucky one day
Dropping by to wish you a terrific weekend. :)
Life's sweets and spices
hugsss!!!
Emotionally beautiful, you.
he knows without knowing
what it's like
being loved and becoming one
he wishes he could be one of the lucky ones...
That hit home. Its hard to see loving couples the same age as me and my wife and not hurt like Hell wishing I could share that with her.
After a time hurting over that fact some sort of balance returns and I realize that she just ain't that type of warm and fuzzy person. And I have to laugh sometimes to think that its wife that is suppose to be wanting such a relationship with the man being distant and cold.
i wud never ever b able to write poems like you...
varied n different
that was a beautiful piece of art... But it seems visceral! kya hua re? wernt u comforting me that day? then? Please don't be sad...
@ indicaspecies
thank you dear...
i am all cheers these days :D
@ d gypsy
thanks dear...
you write so well, i wish i could write like you :)
that P.S. is too close too my heart.
ever1 is lucky , you are too...happiness is just lurking round the corner ...
tc
@ liza
:P
thanx same to you too...
@ raingirl
bearhugs sis...
@ sarahA
thank you...
i have done Phd in emotionalism lol
tc
@ Beach Bum
some feeliNgs we can never understand...but that's life.
tc bro
@ joie
why do you think so...
i think i am the worst poet ever...i am never lyrical...i just jot down whatever comes to mind.
try the same and in no time u'll be writing stupid stuff like me...
btw... i so want a jalebi right now ;D
@ Diya
ohh it was just a phase...lasted two days...all over now.
think positive and be happy... :D
hope is all we have...
then there is dark chocolate too ;D
tc
hey twin..
Kaisa hai ? Kajal here..
will be back to read more of you..
take care okies..me is back to blogging
Cheers
Kajal
o my:) superb! mr.rabbit!!
so amazingly beautiful :)
now smile!!!
@ Rane
hey how are you..??
i am fine...
been busy these days...
welcome back...
will catch ya, as soon i make some time :P
tc n hugs twin
@ divsi
:P
thank you thank you
tc
@ Lena
:P
i am triyng to dear... trying too hard... but Life always surprises me :)
tc n hugs
he knows without knowing
what it's like
being loved and becoming one
he wishes he could be one of the lucky ones...<<
i loved these lines..
@ Phoenix
thank you dear...
:)
oooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh loved it :)
@ purplesilt
WElcome here and thanks a ton :D
You write from a beautiful heart.
@ SandyCarlson ::
welcome here Sandy
thank you... I try to be honest ,that's all.
take care
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