Saturday, July 18, 2009

the empty ghost

walking the jagged path
of the thousand lines
he wrote,
still he can't let it go

treasure was...
her eyes blinking


still drinking from the dried fountain
the empty ghost
whispers
carrying me off to dreams
forgotten
or
thrown away

his heart aches
blurred visions from a beautiful past
worn down to the bone
making him burn
a b/w timeline
visions without colors
stimulate him...
holding back and choking
like a bubble
he will burst one day

scared of sitting still
but not afraid to run
rising up from the dust
in instants
transcendent
and out of time

he knows without knowing
what it's like
being loved and becoming one

he wishes he could be one of the lucky ones...


I've cried more in the past day (no worries, it's welcome) than I have this whole past year.....

...just thought ya should know,
considering we would never meet each other.


Someone please set my soul kitten free...


P.S.
It was supposed to be more
Wherever you are
There's far too much of me still in there.

28 comments:

indicaspecies said...

"whispers
carrying me off to dreams
forgotten"

I like that.
Cheers! Or should I say cheer up?

d gypsy! said...

full of nostalgia and warmth...


i wish i cud write abt a few things like that...

and more than the poem, the P.S impressed me...

sigh, i hope i'd be lucky one day

Liza said...

Dropping by to wish you a terrific weekend. :)

Life's sweets and spices

rain girl said...

hugsss!!!

SarahA said...

Emotionally beautiful, you.

Beach Bum said...

he knows without knowing
what it's like
being loved and becoming one
he wishes he could be one of the lucky ones...


That hit home. Its hard to see loving couples the same age as me and my wife and not hurt like Hell wishing I could share that with her.

After a time hurting over that fact some sort of balance returns and I realize that she just ain't that type of warm and fuzzy person. And I have to laugh sometimes to think that its wife that is suppose to be wanting such a relationship with the man being distant and cold.

joiedevivre said...

i wud never ever b able to write poems like you...

varied n different

Diya said...

that was a beautiful piece of art... But it seems visceral! kya hua re? wernt u comforting me that day? then? Please don't be sad...

rabbit said...

@ indicaspecies

thank you dear...
i am all cheers these days :D

rabbit said...

@ d gypsy

thanks dear...

you write so well, i wish i could write like you :)

that P.S. is too close too my heart.

ever1 is lucky , you are too...happiness is just lurking round the corner ...

tc

rabbit said...

@ liza

:P
thanx same to you too...

rabbit said...

@ raingirl

bearhugs sis...

rabbit said...

@ sarahA

thank you...

i have done Phd in emotionalism lol

tc

rabbit said...

@ Beach Bum

some feeliNgs we can never understand...but that's life.

tc bro

rabbit said...

@ joie

why do you think so...
i think i am the worst poet ever...i am never lyrical...i just jot down whatever comes to mind.

try the same and in no time u'll be writing stupid stuff like me...

btw... i so want a jalebi right now ;D

rabbit said...

@ Diya

ohh it was just a phase...lasted two days...all over now.

think positive and be happy... :D
hope is all we have...

then there is dark chocolate too ;D

tc

Rane (The Orchid with All Shades Pink) said...

hey twin..

Kaisa hai ? Kajal here..

will be back to read more of you..

take care okies..me is back to blogging

Cheers
Kajal

divsi said...

o my:) superb! mr.rabbit!!

Lena said...

so amazingly beautiful :)
now smile!!!

rabbit said...

@ Rane

hey how are you..??
i am fine...

been busy these days...

welcome back...

will catch ya, as soon i make some time :P

tc n hugs twin

rabbit said...

@ divsi

:P
thank you thank you

tc

rabbit said...

@ Lena

:P

i am triyng to dear... trying too hard... but Life always surprises me :)

tc n hugs

Phoenix said...

he knows without knowing
what it's like
being loved and becoming one
he wishes he could be one of the lucky ones...<<

i loved these lines..

VickY said...

@ Phoenix

thank you dear...

:)

purplesilt said...

oooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh loved it :)

rainboy said...

@ purplesilt

WElcome here and thanks a ton :D

SandyCarlson said...

You write from a beautiful heart.

rainboy said...

@ SandyCarlson ::

welcome here Sandy

thank you... I try to be honest ,that's all.

take care

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