Saturday, May 16, 2009

rainy season



condemn rainy season,
all that innocence being smitten by drops

once, we were drenched and close


36 comments:

The Pink Orchid said...

ufffffff. innocence lost in the rain...

guru, kahaan the aap?? :P

ABHISHEK SiM said...

i m feeling bad bro. really bad.

bro,
hurtful memories
will always hurt you
like shards of broken glass
unless you watch out!

keep blogging bro!

Diya said...

I just couldent come up with something appropriate to "Comment", I read it over and over again, But I just couldent. The lines seemed to seep into me. Itz superb rabbit.

But yes, the rainy season indeed needs to be condemned!

Mayz said...

rabbit?? i still cant believe u callin urself a rabbit

Diya said...

he he, bechara :P
Carrot ekdum nahi mil raha tha kya? apna naam hi change karna pada ? ;P Bond? :P ;)

Beach Bum said...

I like it, but I generally saw rain as something that washed away the old returning the innocence.

Kaalicharan said...

I would agree...rain rain go away..big dog(Kaalicharan) wants to play:)

Coming to serious things...all that gloom kinda consumes you brother,go out into the shimmering Sun and set it ablaze with your own might!

Diya said...

RABBIT! Again...!! :X

rain girl said...

i don't mind the rain..make it your friend :)

Shoe Girl said...

smitten...or bitten...

............ exhale.............

joiedevivre said...

he love rains and i love to get drenched :D

Pri said...

everybodys talking about the rains...maybe thats why its decided to take its own sweet time to make an entry :(

nice blog! :)

Lena said...

interesting perspective... usually nobody would talk about rain this way.




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Beauty and the BEast said...

beautiful words... painful thoughts...

Cinderella. said...

:))

This made me smile.

"..innocence smitten by drops..."

Wonderful !

Rakesh Vanamali said...

Somehow, I hate the rains..... makes me feel gloomy and lazy!

But this is well written!

Luscious Sealed Lips said...

Drenched and close! Bloody yes!

I Love rains.

Kisses.

Kulpreet said...

I like, and close part. In the rainy season ( early in Delhi for the second year in a row) it makes a lot of sense. Good though there!

rabbit said...

@ The Pink orchid

i was always here...
where were you lost... lol

rabbit said...

@ Abhi

thanks for feeling the words bro.

tc

rabbit said...

@ diya

:D

thank you dear,this means a lot.

rabbit said...

@ mayz

lolz... i can't help it. ;D

rabbit said...

@ Diya

oye, aisa nai hai.Carrots bahut hain store ker ke rakhi hain.

it's just that i love being a rabbit running in rain.

rabbit said...

@ Beach Bum
thnak you bro
I was like that too...
I used to love that innocence.

rabbit said...

@ Kaali

hehe... dogs are scared of rains.. lolz
what kinda dog are you??

rabbit said...

@ Diya

it always was... ! lolz

rabbit said...

@ rain girl

IT was a friend...

rabbit said...

@ shoe girl

thank you... i will remember that.

rabbit said...

@ joie

ohh he must be so innocent. say my hi...
and get him some jalebi's :)

rabbit said...

@ Pri
welcome ji...

everyone wants to get smitten, the rain will be here soon

rabbit said...

@ Lena

thank you thank you.

rabbit said...

@ B&B

thank you ji

whenever u comment i feel so good.

:)

tc n hugs

rabbit said...

@ Cindy

thank you ji

it's good to see you here sis.


tc n hugs

rabbit said...

@ rakesh

welcome
i love rains ... they are so pure
make everything so beautiful

thank you
tc n hugs mate

rabbit said...

@ Luscious Sealed Lips

welcome here

thank you, we all love rains.


tc n hugs

rabbit said...

@ Kulpreet

yeah, i am awaiting the rains here...
no success as of yet.

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