woke up scared dreams about her & him memories come back to haunt again 6:30 on the clock
instants of fragileness see me full of life now I know That I am the ability lacked the love lost which was never found
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Love is like a butterfly, the more you chase such, the more she will elude you. If you sit patiently she will come rest on your shoulder. The love lost was never ment to be and there is something far more waiting round the corner. My take on ths thing called 'love' If this was my baby (which I know she is not) I would be inclined to change the 'n' to 'and' 'dreams about her and him' I am not so fond of little 'i' in Poetry but here I think it works. Heartfelt words, you.
Don't ever be scared to carry those memories around with you. They are meant to help you learn and to teach lessons. You loved her there is no reason to just let them disappear.
Remember what you said to me, They will fade, (but they will not completely disappear, they will be replaced with other memories, that is good and will make you smile a lifetime.
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Love is like a butterfly, the more you chase such, the more she will elude you. If you sit patiently she will come rest on your shoulder.
The love lost was never ment to be and there is something far more waiting round the corner.
My take on ths thing called 'love'
If this was my baby (which I know she is not) I would be inclined to change the 'n' to 'and' 'dreams about her and him'
I am not so fond of little 'i' in Poetry but here I think it works.
Heartfelt words, you.
You are right in love we get weak,
In weakness we create distinctions, then deem that our puny boundaries are things
which we perceive, and not which we have made.
her n him??
she still lingers ...
he can't erase her aroma off his skin
Don't ever be scared to carry those memories around with you. They are meant to help you learn and to teach lessons. You loved her there is no reason to just let them disappear.
Remember what you said to me, They will fade, (but they will not completely disappear, they will be replaced with other memories, that is good and will make you smile a lifetime.
Chan
is someone going back way to the road?
it lingers.... memory like a lsting fragrance...
comesbas back to him at unexpected times..pain gets magnified...and the illusion that ' move on' had happened...breaks yets again.
I know how it feels...
@ The EnCHANtress
thank you for reminding me.
bearhugs ;)
@ joiedevivre
all i can say is that i tried to be honest.
@ Shoe Girl
hugs dear...
take care
ouch.. painful.. :(
sometimes i run of words or don't know what to say. this is one such moment. very strong lines.
Surprisingly I was gonna say something similar to SarahA..
Was the chhota i intentional? if it were..it worked out well!
And bhai..m back!
@ The Pink orchid
pain help you gain in life sometimes.
@ crystal
yeah it was... :D
welcome back but i am gone .too busy these days.
tc n hugs
@ Abhishek sim
that means a lot.
thank you bro
hugs
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