overcast and clouded
at rain ville
love never met love here
at last the storm came
eager hate engulfed him
he uttered a long piercing cry
maybe it was of pain or of fear
he struggled to find a way
to wash this pile of pain
in the drain
as the drops fall
he walks towards the edge
lookin down and smiling,
...
the depth seemed satisfying
27 comments:
sigh!!
pain penetrates me
drop by drop
-sappho
beautiful and very poignant!!
dat was poignant,deep..
I like the way you metaphorically conveyed his mindset...
But does the said pain/fear bring enough courage to take that deathly plunge. Makes me wonder..?
Keep writing. Spread the voice.
Peace. Be well.
i think there is someone to guide u outta dat deep trench now bro...
tahts raw emotion and concentrated pain, made sound beautiful by words...
nt really...
wz inspired by a frend who lukz lyk dracula..!!;P
bt thnx newaz...
n ths iz pretty gud..
i loved this poem. really did.
@ phoenix
thanks dear :)
wonderful imagination dear :) Loved it as if could feel the pain :) Great work :)
I HATE PAIN! Lets be happy all the time and when pain creeps in just get a box of chocolates and chat. what ya think?
Chan
poignant indeed.. loved this poem, its probably one of the best i read from you :)
eager hate engulfed himIt is really strange how "eager" hate can be for people. I include myself in this trait. Love, hope, courage, and faith are far more complex concepts that take time to develop.
But then again it is always far easier to destroy than create.
Great post as always.
hmm can i use your poem for designing...??
loved it dude.
:-)
@ anwesa
thank you .
@ Kartz
thank you...
will keep on dropping the dew
@ mayz
i know there is someone...but where?
B&B
thanK you
@ bzb4u
ohh..lol
BY chance,if u know any vampires...tell them i so want to meet them ;D
welcome here and thanks a ton ji
@ how do we know
thanks and tc
@ Diya
welcome here diya
and thanks a ton
tc and cheers
@ chan
me too...but pain makes us realize what being happy is.
box of chocolates ... when are where? ;D
V
@ chan
*when and where ?? lol
@ Lena
thank you
:D hugs
@ BB
as u said.. far easier to destroy then create
@ jalebi girl
sure boss
@ anand
thanx mate...
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