Saturday, October 24, 2009

here

so many truths
behind
these words here
ravenous and dissatisfied
smiles and lies
love and pain
women and friends
it's a cycle
repeating
again and again

49 comments:

divsi said...

so true! so real! :)
its jus like sayin im fine wen u re relle not close to bein ok...
i dint get the women n friends wala line tho..

Lucifer said...

this is so true n apt title to d post...its right HERE!!!

rainboy said...

@ divsi

u got me...

the line that u didn't get is kinda complicated.
:)

tc n cheers

rainboy said...

@ Mayz

thanks bro.. :)

it is right HERE...everything and nothing...


tc n cheers

MysLykeMeeh said...

You mean that your life is like a cycle which repeats again and again?

But, if you said it in general...I don't agree that much. There are many things hidden, it comes when you let them. Sometimes, you think it's a cycle...but when you take the road less traveled, you will find something else...

rainboy said...

@ Mys Lyke Meeh

that was about my love life dear...

:P

Vee said...

Kya Hua Munna?

rainboy said...

@ Vee

we'll talk in details with vodka...
dec is not far... :)

runnerfrog said...

Fashion is cyclical. Dress your own. ;-)

rainboy said...

@ runnerfrog

lol ... :P

Anonymous said...

Yes it does seem to be so *sigh*

Unknown said...

Great writing for someone as young! Love your lines in 'love and pain'

rainboy said...

@ sarahA

thanks again sarah :)

Take Care n cheers

rainboy said...

@ Smita
welcome here and thanks a lot for liking :)


tc n have a nice weekend.

Anonymous said...

friends come..friends go. perhaps women too..but there are always exceptions.

rainboy said...

@ honeybunchsugarplum

Welcome here :D

I know there are exceptions..but I haven't met them yet.Seriously.

Take care

Americanising Desi said...

this is so remarkably true!

rainboy said...

@ American Desi

Thank you :D

Take care n hugs

Phoenix said...

in life shit happens.. :)

beautifully written :)

rainboy said...

@ Phoenix

When I read it today..I can't believe I wrote it. I must have been high lol

Sakhi. said...

ccccuuuuttteee!!..

Diwakar Sinha said...

the cycle, yes definately!
very well written..

rainboy said...

@ sakhii••

Welcome sakhii and thanks a lot.

take care

rainboy said...

@ Diwakar Sinha

Welcome and thanks for appreciating Diwakar.

take care

Gauri Mathur said...

Heyy!!
Nice!!

rainboy said...

@ Gauri Mathur


Thank you and welcome here

Aayushi Mehta said...

good work, nice blog!

rainboy said...

@ Aayushi Mehta :
thanks Aayushi ...
Welcome here...
I am not writing here anymore...
I write at http://smellofearthafterrain.blogspot.com/

infinite_thoughts said...

oh trust me its a circle...wat goes around comes around..in wat situation or state....one can only imagine!!!
n den one kinda starts enjoying this whole effect... :D

rainboy said...

@ infinite_thoughts ::

I know it has been a cycle...
Every time I come back to the same crossroads .
and TRUST me I really don't enjoy it ever. Never want to be on the same roads again.

Take care and Thanks for a thoughtful comment.

infinite_thoughts said...

:) enjoy the journey...dere is nothing kept in the destination..!!!

Sakhi. said...

lovely blog!!

rainboy said...

@ infinite_thoughts ::

But Don't we all want to reach the destination ...

rainboy said...

@ sakhii•• ::

thank you sakhi :)
take care

infinite_thoughts said...

tats the irony my friend...we dont tend enjoy the journey..we are focused!!!!

rainboy said...

@ infinite_thoughts ::

my heart speak volumes of the journeys,
there was nothing under all those emotions I over turned,
no a glimmer of freedom on the love slicked paths,
He was lost with an atlas that was all destination and no journey

I am tired of peeking out toward the horizon and burning my eyes.

infinite_thoughts said...

"I am tired of peeking out toward the horizon and burning my eyes."

wow... ~smiles~

rainboy said...

Thanks... ~chuckles~

take care

joie de vivre said...

hehe..jeevan hai..bach nai sakte inse..

rainboy said...

@ joie de vivre ::

haan aaj nai to kal..sabka number aana hai !

Toi said...

life as she is.

Unknown said...

woww ! u write so well

rainboy said...

@toi :
absolutely :)

take care TOI

rainboy said...

@ bebo ♥

thanks ji :D

take care and hugs

indicaspecies said...

Just as the movement of the stars, and the earth and everything else in this universe, there is the cycle of life.
Ups and downs, love and pain and mch more will continue. What matters is how you handle it, and learn to live in and through all those moments.

Hope I don't sound like am preaching. Have a nice day my friend, and keep smiling. Cheers.:)

rainboy said...

@ indicaspecies :

You didn't sound like a preacher.
Infact I agree to every word you said my ghumakkad friend.

and as always I am jealous of your travels hehehe

take care :)

joie de vivre said...

haha..

women n fiend..love n pain..
waah waah

cant imagine anymore adjectives now..
;)

Cassidy said...

So lovely.

Rashmi said...

Very good read indeed!
Cheers!

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